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Royal Flush Ch1 Pg14

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Well, the scene shifts back to Caul's house. I don't think I need to tell you who this person is...
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My only critique would be the door knob scene. I don't know anyone that turns the door knob that way, and it looks unnatural in my eyes. It's a minor criticism really.

I think you did a great job with the toning of the walls, and the attitudes of the two ladies are well defined by their posture and dialogue.